You have provided a basic understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why and where ideas were taken from; however, you have not explained in enough depth how you came to a final decision.
You need to: 1) Explain in more depth why Amber's was the chosen product and what ideas from other group member's products were incorporated and why 2) Include pictures of yours and other group member's digipak and adverts to show where ideas were taken from 3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillaries, explaining clearly why Amber's ancillaries were chosen for the final group products, as well as mentioning where ideas were taken from other group members and why. You have mentioned why you feel your products are successful, but need to think more carefully about why they are conventional and how this appeals to your TA overall
You have provided a basic understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why and where ideas were taken from; however, you have not explained in enough depth how you came to a final decision.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Explain in more depth why Amber's was the chosen product and what ideas from other group member's products were incorporated and why
2) Include pictures of yours and other group member's digipak and adverts to show where ideas were taken from
3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillaries, explaining clearly why Amber's ancillaries were chosen for the final group products, as well as mentioning where ideas were taken from other group members and why.
ReplyDeleteYou have mentioned why you feel your products are successful, but need to think more carefully about why they are conventional and how this appeals to your TA overall